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中考英语作文范文赏析：突发事件

【一、突发事件问题（热点）】

突发事件问题是中考书面表达的热点话题，从非典到雪灾，从地震到甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases），都频频出现在各地中考试卷中，因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度，掌握基本句式和写作技巧非常必要

典型例句：

1. one +of + 形容词最高级+ 名词复数

One of the biggest events in China in 2008 is that the earthquake happened in WenChuan.

2. Its our duty to do sth

Its our duty to help them.

3. Asas possible

We shoud help them as much as possible.

4. here be

Here are lots of things we can do.

5. We shoud keep calm instead of being afraid.我们要保持冷静而不能害怕。

6. make +sb+ 形容词

It makes many people homeless.

7. too to= so that

They are too young to look after themselves

例文：

1、汶川大地震（黑龙江鸡西）

5月12日，四川省汶川地区发生了罕见的大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法和感受。

要求：文章语言流畅，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80100字左右；

词汇参考：地震earthquake，悲痛sorrow，受到感动be deeply moved，安慰comfort，重建rebuild，自愿做某事volunteer to do sth

参考范文：

On May 12th, a big earthquake happened in Wenchun, Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow.A lot of people volunteer to help them. Some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand.

Im deeply moved by these people. So Ill use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.

2、雪灾

去年春节期间，我国大部分地区遭受雪灾，特别是南方，室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪，数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生，你有何感想？有何打算？能不能改变这种状态？

As we know, our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavy snow. It made the buses, trains and planes stop. Millions of people couldnt go home. Many people suffered trouble. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fight against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of nowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.

3.甲型HINI流感

从电视上看到美国正流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu），部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。

要点：

一。询问

1.他的健康状况；

2.他们学校有无甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）；

3.他们是否还上学。

二。建议

1.尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方；

2.勤洗手；讲卫生

3.多开窗，保持空气新鲜；

4.多吃水果蔬菜。

Dear Mike,

From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result. Im so worried about you. Are you alright? Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school? Do you still have to school everyday?

To stay away from the disease, youd better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean; Open the window to have more fresh air in the room; And eat more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.

So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and youll be OK.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

4、（四川南充）

5.12汶川大地震后，某校将开展人人为灾区孩子献爱心的主题班会活动，现在请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下：1.许多孩子地震后不能上学 2.。没有足够的学习用品和衣物 3.每个孩子都应该有上学的权利 4.我们应该作一些力所能及的事情去帮助、他们，比如 5.希望他们能尽快重返校园

注意：1.可根据要点，适当发挥，（参考词汇：school things, have the right to do something, as possible as one can）

2.词数：70词左右

参考作文：

Dear students，

After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school. Some of them are even homeless.Their schools and houses have destroyed. They can just live in the open air. They dont have enough school things or clothes .As we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble. As a Chinese, we should help them as possible as we can. We can raise some money and things for them. And we can also write to them to encourage them. I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.

Students Union